Music video- draft edit 2

This is another draft edit of my music video. I organised a second meet up for filming to fill in previous gaps, this time I chose to meet up at a later time of 4pm, to add continuity within the video and to show a time line of the day. I made some adjustments to the title, when researching Coasts I came across their logo, so I included this in my video, still using white text to stand out. In the last part of my video I edited the speed and duration of the shots, slowing them down to fit in with the pace of the song, showing a relationship between the song and visuals which responses to Andrew Goodwin's theory. My music video isn't completely finished, you will notice two small gaps and in these gaps will feature a time lapse and shot of the sky, all of which were suggested to me in the peer feedback. 

Hot Desking- Peer Feedback

I found the hot desking very helpful as it gave my some ideas for extra footage which I was having trouble coming up with. I will take in consideration what the viewers said for instance the length of the clips and apply this to my video. However some I will not be able to adjust; it was suggested that i cut out the shaky clips which I'm not going to do because the idea behind my video is to make the audience think that the person with the camera is actually apart of the friendship group and not apart of the film crew. Overall I am pleased with the feedback from the viewers. 

Music video- draft 1

Above is an incomplete version of my music video. I am pleased with the way its going, however I need to organise another meet up with the cast to fill in the gaps. I like how the shots relate to the lyrics, for example when it says adventure the cast look as if they themselves are about to go on one. This is a key aspect of Andrew Goodwins theory, showing a relationship between visuals and the song.